Michigan River of Words—Michigan's Annual Environmental Poetry & Art Contest
2008 Poetry Winners—Congratulations!
Category III
Poetry Winners
Grades 7-9
1st Place
Patty Schlutt
Age 13
Crossroads Middle School
Grand Rapids, Michigan
Teacher: Rod Torreson
Dreams You Had When You Were a Child
Morning crept
over your senses in the form
of dying starts reaching
their last tendrils of light over a bright lake.
You walked. Since dunes pulled you up
to their smooth sunsets,
you followed your father's footprints
until you could bury your face
in the stars and breathe
the comfort and beauty
like you used to breathe it close to earth
when you'd bend your head
into the morning glories
and admire the way their leaves
arch into heaven.
It was early when you
stood out over the lake in
blue sweatpants. You've been
remembering your childhood often lately,
The sun a blurry red lullaby
that bled into your sleep as dreams do,
but they were good dreams
and your father walked through them with his
dark coat that was
old and stitched. He'd bought it in Mississippi
when he was twenty and still wore it
like a promise over his shoulders.
2nd Place
Emily Malone
Age 10
Immanuel St. James Lutheran School
Grand Rapids, Michigan
Teacher: Rodney Torreson
Visiting a River
the shore flooded
with wild magnolias
Bright, colorful fish
drifting
in the clear water.
You slip off your old
ratty sneakers,
dip your foot into
ice cold water.
Slowly your foot
reaches the bottom
of the knee-deep river.
The startled fish
suddenly come back
to explore the giant
foot. that
They wonder how it got there.
They think and think
until it's too much for them,
and it seems
like their tiny
brains will burst.
You take your
foot out,
start walking home.
The fish are relieved
and gladly twirl away.
3rd Place
Rebecca Chen
Age 12
Novi Middle School
Novi, Michigan
Stream
I sit by a stream, listening to it flow,
To water rushing by, never stopping for anything,
The sound soothes me in a strange way,
For now I can let go of all my worried calmly.
The stream laps against the banks, back and forth,
Like the gentle caress of a mother's hand.
It sparkles under the blanket of sunlight,
Reflecting millions of glittering golden "jewels."
It is sweet, cold, and refreshing when I take a drink,
As if it were my first taste of water in years.
I run an idle hand carelessly through the stream,
And fish come to nibble at my fingers, tickling me.
It is so tranquil and peaceful here, alone in the wilderness.
Category IV
Poetry Winners
Grades 10-12
1st Place
Rachel McGuinness
Age 16
West Catholic High School
Grand Rapids, Michigan
Teacher: Rodney Torreson
I Have Always Wanted a Giraffe for a Pet
I have always wanted
A giraffe for a pet.
When I was younger,
I had visions of a giraffe
That would stick its head
Into my bright pink
Two-story bedroom window.
I would slide down its
Graceful neck into my backyard
Which would morph into a
Jungle-themed
Full-size soccer field.
We'd play together for hours.
I would win, of course,
Because it was my house.
One day I saw a picture
Of a gray giraffe by a water hole
Gazing serenely off into the distance.
Rising out of the shadow
Of its hypnotizing neck were the words
"For information call the
South Africa Mystic Hotel."
The ripples in the water
Slowly distorted the letters
Until finally they were
Only the rocks
Surrounding the water hole,
Fragments of my impossible dream.
2nd Place
Johana De Los Ángeles Masis
Age 19
Colegio de Solentiname, Nicaragua
Solentiname
You���re a treasure, of beautiful light
that shines with much love
and tenderness the lives of your inhabitants
with your beautiful natural riches,
filled with smiles
all our lives,
the songs of the birds
the heart beat of my heart renews itself
when I watch the immense blue sky
that covers beautiful Solentiname,
I fill with happiness
because I belong to you.
How beautiful is my Solentiname!
3rd Place
Daniel Pakkala
Age 15
Hancock High School
Hancock, Michigan
Teacher: Stephen Smith
Water Everywhere
Water Everywhere
Streams, Rivers, Brooks, lakes
They are all connected
All over the world
The Great Lakes
Channels, Oceans, canals, Seas
Help with transportation
Small Boats, Big Boats
Lots of Bridges
Water Everywhere
Waves Crashing
Ponds, Springs, Rivulets, Tide Pools
Causing Erosion
Fishing, Boating, Swimming
People having fun
Water Everywhere
Honorable Mention
Britany Smestad
Age 12
North Point Christian
Grand Rapids, Michigan
Teacher: Rodney Torreson
A Waterfall
How it races down a torrent,
with all the other strands of water.
Then it flips over and lands on the finish line of rocks.
At that time it slows down into a river
and wins first place.
The price of being with the fish,
the friendly silent fish that splash around
up and down all day long.
The late ones rush into the seaweed homes.
The seaweed is moldy and slimly,
it is nothing you want.
The last place winners then call the wind,
to make the noise and blow the water
into a pool of zebra muscles; sharp zebra muscles.